Caitlin Keiper Back to Showcase
AP Literature/Composition
Period 5
27 March 2004
Canto XXXI.V
Circle 8.5: Caverna The Incredulous
As Caity and Virgil are being guided down the well by the hand of ANTAEUS,
they see the frozen waters of COCYTUS below them. Before they can reach the last circle however, he places them
upon a ledge sticking out from the musty stone walls of the well.
Once they are safely on the solid ground of the shelf, Virgil points out
a great cave that lies before them. This
is circle eight and a half, or CAVERNA, the Italian word for cave.
As the pair enter the cave they are coming upon the circle of THE
INCREDULOUS, those who put God to the test.
The sinners here constantly peel off their skin layer by layer, to prove
to themselves that they are real. Entwined
around them are snakes that are also shedding their skin.
This symbolizes the first infidelity to God, caused by the snake in the
Garden of Eden. The sinners sit
deep inside the cave surrounded by the skins of humans and snakes.
Once their skin is entirely gone, it grows back to be peeled once again.
Among the sinners punished here are ADAM and EVE, who are
peeling off each other’s skin. They
recall their story to the travelers. All
of THE FOLLOWERS OF MOSES who tested God and were killed by snakes are
also found here. Caity and Virgil
pass LYCAON, who tested Zeus. He
tells his story to the travelers and points out SEMELE and PROMETHEUS,
who are next to him in Hell and also put Zeus to the test.
Like THE BLASPHEMERS, those who tested any god are punished in
this circle, not just those who tested the Christian God.
The last sinner Caity and Virgil encounter before entering the long,
winding staircase to the frozen lake below them is HEROD, who tried to
test Jesus before he was crucified. He
is placed at the center of a circle of PHARISEES and SADDUCEES,
those who were known for questioning Jesus.
Instead of his skin, he is forced to rip out his own heart and pass it
around for all of the sinners who tested Jesus to see.
It is then returned to his body, only to be ripped out once again.
The travelers are so disturbed by this scene that they turn away, and
head towards the staircase at the end of the cave.
As we traveled through the dank and acrid air,
I saw below us what appeared to be a frozen lake
But it seemed that Antaeus was not taking us there.
In his enormous hand I steadied myself,
By linking my arms around one of his bulky fingers,
Until my Guide and I were set down upon a solid shelf.
“Before us lies Caverna, the eighth and a half circle of Hell,”
My Guide said, “Within lies the incredulous.
The horrible stench caused by their decaying bodies is what we smell.”
We entered the enormous mouth which soon began to shrink into
A narrow tunnel as dark as a night when the moon cannot be seen.
After traveling a while, the pathway widened and a large gap came into view.
As the world reeked of destruction on September Eleventh of the 2001 year,
When the two strong towers fell in New York City,
I had never until then felt such horrid fear. (15)
The lives of many honorable men were lost,
The strength of my country was in shambles,
Benefit concerts and donations could not cover the cost.
Scared and alone as I felt then, I began to feel now.
My fellow countrymen were with me as here I have my Guide,
But in times of great ruin, that comfort does not help somehow.
So was the degree of destruction we looked upon in that cave
Where the incredulous peeled away at themselves just to see if they were real.
In order to not turn my sight from them, I forced myself to be brave.
Around the sinners, snakes were entwined,
Also shedding themselves layer by layer,
Mixing human skin with that of the reptile kind.
“Pay attention to me!” yelled one,
“For I was the first to dishonor God
And cause others to follow what I had done.” (30)
I turned to see a naked woman,
Unclothed even of her own skin,
Peeling away at a fleshier man.
My head swarmed with thoughts of who these sinners could be
But I was not sure if I should question them,
Or allow them to tell me of their own decree.
I looked to my Guide, “Go ahead,”
He said, “Ask what you are thinking.”
“Are you Adam and Eve?” I guessed from what she had said.
“Yes, that we are.” This time Adam replied,
“She was led by the snake to question the power of God
And when she offered the chance to me, I followed at her side.
I am now forced to rip apart the woman that was made of
My own rib. By doing this I am aware that she is real and thus am I,
A constant reminder of God’s power above.” (45)
My mind brimmed with still more curiosity.
There were a great number of sinners here,
More than there had first appeared to be.
Some were crawling from beneath tangled skins,
Others were covered with writhing snakes.
There were at least 3,000 being punished for their sins.
“Why are there so many in this circle?” I asked.
“There seem to be a great deal more sinners here
Than in the other circles through which we passed.”
“Many of the followers of Moses can be found here,
Those who put God to the test and were killed by snakes,” Said Eve.
“It is with that eternal punishment they now appear.”
The rest are those who still did not listen to God’s prerequisite,
And that one with his skin growing back tested Zeus.
There are many who question faith, and many of them who also try and prove it.” (60)
My Guide and I turned to see the shade that Eve was pointing to.
We watched as a giant Anaconda wove itself around him.
On his body, layers of wrinkling skin grew anew.
Thinking that he would begin to tear if I paused,
I took this opportunity to ask him his name:
“Who are you and what wrong have you caused?”
He began to peel, starting at his finger tips,
Ripping his own skin like that of an orange.
He tore it off in long strips.
“My name is Lycaon, the Arcadian King who
Tested Zeus not once but twice.
It was too late when I finally knew.
First I tried to kill him when he was in his deepest of dreams.
When that did not work I tried to feed him a feast of human flesh.
He understood all along what I was trying to do it seems. (75)
He did not eat the meal and I was not only punished here,
But in my mortal life as well,
For he used his thunderbolt to overturn my palace and left me trembling with fear.
I fled into the hills where I became a wolf and was covered with hair.
I acquired a taste and lust for blood.
I ate the flocks and spent the rest of my days there.”
On either side of Lycaon, there were two other souls.
Disgusted by his story I wanted to turn away,
But in my understanding, I did not want to leave holes.
“Who are these others, who accompany you?”
“Semele is on my left and Prometheus is on my right,” the sinner answered
“They are also punished for the same sin from which I flew.”
Having heard enough, I turned to my Guide.
With a nod of the head he led me on to the end of the cave.
Thinking I would now have the opportunity to hide (90)
From this horrible scene that lay before me,
I realized that as always in this eternal Hell
The worst is saved as the last for me to see.
In a circle, was a group of men sitting around
A single man who was placed at the very center.
They were passing a human heart among them without making a sound.
Their eyes were enthralled as they stared at
The pounding muscle. The one body part which
Pumps the breath of life into all that
It inhabits. Afraid of what would happen if I
Disrupted their concentration I turned to my Guide.
“Who are these souls?” I asked and he gave a heavy sigh.
“The men in the circle, completely enraptured by the heart
Are the Pharisees and Sadducees who constantly tested
And questioned Jesus’ art. (105)
In the very center is the greatest tester of them all,
Herod, who had the power to spare the life of our great Savior
But instead laughed in his face and allowed him to fall.”
I watched the souls carefully as he explained to me
Who they were in life
Until each shade had the chance to see
The human heart. Eventually it was handed back
to Herod, who had a gaping hole in the left side
Of his body which was oozing blood and turning black.
It captivated his enormous eyes
As he took his own bloody heart in his dirty hands,
But soon his enthrallment vanished like the stars in cloudy skies.
He forced it back into his wound with a twist.
His skin covered the opening at a rapid pace
And once all the way healed, he made a fist (120)
Which dove back through his skin without his control,
Tearing out his heart and leaving
In its place, once again, a rotting hole.
So taken aback was I by this sight
That I grabbed hold of my Guide
And covered my eyes with fright.
“Once is enough to see something like this,
No need to watch them do it over and over again.”
Said my Guide as he took my hand in his.
He led me to another narrow hallway with a staircase,
Avoiding the piles of skin that lay all around us.
It was then my Guide turned to look into my face.
“Gather yourself and begin to prepare
Because it is now that we enter the final circle of Hell,”
We then began to descend the winding stair. (135)
The stagnant air clung to my skin,
As I slowly moved downward step by step.
The darkness caused me to begin
To
fill my mind with dread,
But not as much as the thought of what lay ahead.
13-24 As
the world. . . . .be brave. The
scariest occurrence and greatest destruction that Caity Keiper has lived through
so far was when the Twin Towers fell down on September 11, 2001.
Airplanes hijacked by members of the Islamic Fundamentalist group Al-Qaeda,
crashed into each one of the towers. Many
Americans who worked in the towers were killed as well as many police men and
firemen who risked their lives trying to save the people lost within the
wreckage. When the towers fell,
fear spread in the United States because it was the first time the country,
which thought of itself as a strong world power, had been attacked on its own
soil since Pearl Harbor on December 7, 1941.
Here she compares the degree of that destruction with the damage the
sinners in this circle put on themselves. She
also compares the depth of her fear in this circle to that she felt when the
Twin Towers were destroyed.
37 I
looked to my Guide. . . As in
previous cantos, Virgil is able to tell what Caity is thinking.
Adam and Eve Adam
and Eve, the first sinners and the introducers of human disobedience in the
Bible are located in this circle. Found
in the first chapters of Genesis, God created Adam, the first man on Earth, and
then from his rib formed Eve, the first woman.
God placed them in the Garden of Eden and told them they were allowed to
eat any fruit except for the fruit from the tree that gave knowledge of what is
good and what is bad. A conniving
snake lures Eve to the tree and convinces her to try the fruit.
Eve then gave some to Adam who also ate it.
The couple then realizes they are naked and cover themselves with fig
leaves and hide from God in the trees. He
finds them and exiles them from the garden of Eden.
He also punishes the snake, making him crawl on his stomach for the rest
of his days, causing humans to be scared of him and stomp on him with their
feet. The couple is placed here because they tested the power of
God. Instead of listening to him,
Eve succumbed to the sinful ways of the snake and caused Adam to do the same.
Thus they are punished together and serve as a symbol of the first
infidelity against God. The snake
in the Garden of Eden symbolizes the snakes used in this punishment who wind
around the sinners and mix their skin with that of the humans.
51 There
were at least 3,000. . . Although
it does not say the exact number in the Bible, Caity supposes that it was quite
a lot.
Followers of Moses
1 Corinthians 10:9 : “We must not put the Lord to the test, as some
of them did – and they were killed by snakes.”
These were the followers of Moses who did not believe and tried to test
God. He then ordered them to be put
to death by snakes. This passage
serves as a model in the Bible, so that no one from that point on would try to
put God to the test. The mention of
their punishment here correlates with the punishment in this circle.
60 There
are many who question. . . Adam
and Eve sound wise throughout the retelling of their story especially in this
line. That is because they know
that God is real. He placed them in
the Garden of Eden and they had direct conversation with him.
Although they are being punished in Hell, they are some of the few who
realize the greatness of their sin, allowing them to understand the sins of
others.
66 what
wrong have you caused?. . . Caity asks a good question here because Lycaon was thought
to have been one of the people who caused Zeus to flood the world and destroy
all humans.
Lycaon Zeus
was invited to dine with the father of Lycaon’s paramour but Lycaon did not
believe that his guest was actually the mighty god Zeus.
He first tried to kill him in the middle of the night.
When that did not work he cut up human bodies and attempted to serve them
to Zeus. Being a god, Zeus
immediately recognized what was happening to him and hurled thunderbolts upon
Lycaon’s palace, killing his sons and turning him into a wolf.
Lycaon developed a thirst for blood, like that of an animal.
72 It
was too late when. . . Once
Lycaon realized that Zeus was really a god he had already been punished and
turned into a wolf.
82 I
did not want to leave holes. . . Caity
wants to understand everything she possibly can on her journey throughout Hell.
Semele When
Zeus became Semele’s lover, Hera, Zeus’s wife, appeared to Semele and told
her that she should ask Zeus to prove that he was a god by appearing in his full
glory before her. Semele got Zeus
to promise that he would grant whatever she asked for and then asked him to
appear in his full magnificence. She
was then incinerated by Zeus’ glory.
Prometheus Prometheus
prepared two sacrifices for Zeus: one was the fine meat and organs of an ox
wrapped in the paunch and the other was only bones covered with rich fat.
When Zeus chose the less desirable one, Prometheus did not believe he was
as great as was thought throughout the land.
Prometheus then attempted to smuggle fire out of Heaven and then was
chained to a cliff in the Caucasus Mountains by Zeus.
Each day and eagle would come and peck at his liver and each night the
wounds would heal and the liver would grow back, just as the skin grows back on
the sinners in the Caverna.
92-93 I soon realized. . . .for me to see. Like this canto is set up from the least sinful to
the worst, so is
Dante’s map of Hell.
100-101 Afraid
of what. . . .turned to my Guide. Because
the sinners are so deep in concentration, Virgil must explain the scene having
traveled to hell before.
Pharisees and Sadducees These were the Jewish priests who followed Jesus around,
questioning him about religion and constantly trying to prove that he was not
the son of God.
Herod After
Pontius Pilot says he will not crucify Jesus, the Jewish Priests send Jesus to
Herod Antipas. He asks Jesus to
perform a miracle to prove that he is truly the son of God. When Jesus refuses to do this, Herod laughs at him and sends
him back to Pilot to be executed. Herod
Antipas is given the worst punishment of all the sinners in Caverna.
Instead of ripping of his skin, he must rip out his heart and pass it
among the Pharisees and Sadducees surrounding him.
By doing this he proves to himself he is real, as well as the unbelievers
that encircle him.
127 “Once
is enough. . . Even
Virgil is disgusted by this scene.
133 “Gather
yourself. . . Virgil is trying
to renew Caity’s strength so that she is capable of continuing her journey.